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Contemplation at Dusk

Postby a_contemplative_life » Mon Dec 14, 2009 4:56 pm

This is the second chapter of, I guess, what is evolving into a post-film story about Eli & Oskar. It picks up where Christmas in Karlstad left off. Hope everyone enjoys. Thoughts and comments are, of course, welcome.

I'm not sure where I'm going with this. I feel like I'm groping in a dark room. Who knows what'll happen?
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby covenant6452 » Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:10 pm

That was a nice one...Eli thinking about their future. I liked her trying to will herself to change as well.
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby HonzaP » Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:10 pm

a_contemplative_life wrote:This is the second chapter of, I guess, what is evolving into a post-film story about Eli & Oskar. It picks up where Christmas in Karlstad left off. Hope everyone enjoys. Thoughts and comments are, of course, welcome.

I'm not sure where I'm going with this. I feel like I'm groping in a dark room. Who knows what'll happen?


I am probably blind but where it the link to this "second chapter" I don't see any

p. s. if anyone would be so nice to tell me some instructions how to get to the "second chapter" I'd really appreciate it :oops:
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby a_contemplative_life » Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:34 pm

HonzaP wrote:
a_contemplative_life wrote:This is the second chapter of, I guess, what is evolving into a post-film story about Eli & Oskar. It picks up where Christmas in Karlstad left off. Hope everyone enjoys. Thoughts and comments are, of course, welcome.

I'm not sure where I'm going with this. I feel like I'm groping in a dark room. Who knows what'll happen?


I am probably blind but where it the link to this "second chapter" I don't see any

p. s. if anyone would be so nice to tell me some instructions how to get to the "second chapter" I'd really appreciate it :oops:


Here you go.

http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancontent/ff/contemplation-dusk-0
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Postby HonzaP » Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:37 pm

thanks I found it while searching the site with the readings (recent ones) and again it's beautiful, you could write a book it would be great, I will be your first fan :D
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby a_contemplative_life » Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:56 pm

HonzaP wrote:thanks I found it while searching the site with the readings (recent ones) and again it's beautiful, you could write a book it would be great, I will be your first fan :D


I hope it doesn't turn into that! Because it's totally disruptive right now! (But fun too) :)
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby PeteMork » Tue Dec 15, 2009 6:29 pm

Wonderful job! This one really sucked me in. You have Eli down pat -- I can completely imagine her thinking this way. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby a_contemplative_life » Wed Dec 16, 2009 1:22 am

Here is Chapter 3 :)

http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancontent/ff/together-night
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby xbox fan » Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:09 am

wow. I don't know what to say. Incredible. Love your writing.
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Re: Contemplation at Dusk

Postby lombano » Wed Dec 16, 2009 3:07 am

All three chapters are excellent, but this last one is so beautiful...
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