Author should have concentrated of Tomas Alfredson's considerable storytelling skills which were so masterfully utilised in Let The Right One In and in TTSS.
What I find most interesting about TA's Storytelling skills is that it is so purely visual based....For the most part, he relies heavily on the visual and nothing more.
Think about this...Guilliam never once makes mention of his homosexual lifestyle. In fact, no one in the film ever once makes mention of it. Put this is in the hands of another director and surely they would have probably felt they needed to add a bit of dialog or exposition to the proceedings. But not Tomas. Tomas relies solely on the visual. Even when we are introduced to Guilliam's lover, it's never explicitly stated that they are lovers. The visual and the soundtract suggests it, yet the film never explains it like it might do in the hands of a less confident director. So basically, every story facet is built from the visual rather then exposition...much like it did with LTROI...after all LTROI doesn't explain in certain scenes, instead it just relies on the Visual to tell the story and have the audience play along.
Both LTROI and TTSS don't really hit you over the head in terms of repeating themselves with exposition. One of my favourite moments in TTSS is such a simple understated scene yet it tells us so much about the character of Smiley, even though it's a very short scene.
That scene would be the Car Ride with the Beekeeper and Guillam. The loose bee in the car. It's the way Smiley reacts to the situation that manages to tell us so much about his character, and it's done in one breif visual moment. The way he very calmly lets the fly remove itself from the car by simply opening the window. He doesn't swat at it, doesn't get frustrated by it, he just lets it remove itself in a cool calm demeanor.
It's one brief visual moment, but it tells us so much about Smiley and the problem solver he is. But it also shows how he can keep restraint over himself...which is then contrasted later in on the film when he is internally debating with himself just as the Mole is about to walk into his trap
Anyways skip to the end...that's basically what I love about his work (or what I've seen so far)...he is a director who is so confident in the strengh of the visual and the effect it will have in playing out the narrative. His narrative structure is purely visual and he has the confidence to let it play like it does instead of feeling the need to overexplain or repeat himself