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Clubmeister
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my song

Post by Clubmeister » Wed Feb 29, 2012 11:47 pm

Hi, everybody!
Here's my song. Not about LTROI, just a song. I hesitated, where to put it, so it's here.
Thanks David (DMt.) for language help (I tortured him for two months :lol: )
Sorry for accent, I suspect, intrige's pronunciation is better than mine. Video - about nothing, just to make it more fun (some pictures of my homeland, from the last summer).
The meeting
-1-
Tell me about your grief and pain,
Just tell and then forget.
However many days and years,
It's useless to regret.

The evil’s gone so long ago,
We don’t need to complain,
Hello, my friend, - the years have passed,
And we’ve met up again.

-2-
A dusty bottle of old wine
Laid up so long ago,
We'll take to wild, deserted shores
That once we used to know.

And looking at the angry sea
Throwing the sand like flame
Perhaps we'll say the endless road
Has done with us the same

-3-
In taverns 'til the morning star
We'll be where we belong
All faces are familiar,
Together we'll sing songs

We'll play the fool for Lady Luck
Before we have to go,
Then maybe she will once again
Come knocking on the door.
He is looking at me, silently, expectantly, in the near-dark room, neither smiling nor frowning; gaunt as a Belsen child, proud as the Devil, distant and beautiful as a star. [DMt.]

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Re: my song

Post by PeteMork » Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:22 am

What a perfectly beautiful, heart-warming song! I don't know what else I can say! Words: perfect; Melody: perfect. Vocal: More than perfect.
We never stop reading, although every book comes to an end, just as we never stop living, although death is certain. (Roberto Bolaño)

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Re: my song

Post by Clubmeister » Thu Mar 01, 2012 6:46 am

Thanks, Pete!So many compliments make me blush :oops: :D
He is looking at me, silently, expectantly, in the near-dark room, neither smiling nor frowning; gaunt as a Belsen child, proud as the Devil, distant and beautiful as a star. [DMt.]

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Re: my song

Post by intrige » Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:01 am

So maybe I speak the words a little better than you, but everything else you did way better than me. Lyrics, melody, instruments, sound quallity, voice.. Really good! I am impressed! :D
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Re: my song

Post by mackousko » Thu Mar 01, 2012 12:55 pm

:shock: Crazy good! :mrgreen:
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Re: my song

Post by Clubmeister » Thu Mar 01, 2012 7:09 pm

intrige wrote:So maybe I speak the words a little better than you, but everything else you did way better than me. Lyrics, melody, instruments, sound quallity, voice.. Really good! I am impressed! :D
Thanks, Intrige! I'm impressed, that you impressed :) I know, it's not easy to impress you.
mackousko wrote::shock: Crazy good! :mrgreen:
Thank you, Mac!
He is looking at me, silently, expectantly, in the near-dark room, neither smiling nor frowning; gaunt as a Belsen child, proud as the Devil, distant and beautiful as a star. [DMt.]

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Re: my song

Post by EEA » Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:08 pm

:o 8-) A great song. Nice voice.

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Re: my song

Post by Clubmeister » Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:20 pm

EEA wrote::o 8-) A great song. Nice voice.
Thank you, EEA, you're very kind :)
He is looking at me, silently, expectantly, in the near-dark room, neither smiling nor frowning; gaunt as a Belsen child, proud as the Devil, distant and beautiful as a star. [DMt.]

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Re: my song

Post by intrige » Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:33 pm

Clubmeister wrote:
intrige wrote:So maybe I speak the words a little better than you, but everything else you did way better than me. Lyrics, melody, instruments, sound quallity, voice.. Really good! I am impressed! :D
Thanks, Intrige! I'm impressed, that you impressed :) I know, it's not easy to impress you.
What? Am I not? XD I haven't thought about that! :lol: Seriously, am I really hard to impress to all of you?
You're welcome anyway, it was very VERY good. Would love to listen a LTROI song!!
Bulleri bulleri buck, hur många horn står upp

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Re: my song

Post by ofelia » Thu Mar 01, 2012 11:50 pm

intrige wrote:Seriously, am I really hard to impress to all of you?
I think maybe he means just because of the quality you put into fan art and fan fiction, that your stuff is impressive so you might not be impressed by other people. But I think everyone on the site is equally impressed/impressive :roll: :D

Clubmeister, I like your voice, this is a really nice song.

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