That took a while to do. I had bits of that here and there - and really had to force myself to get with the program and put it together. I have parts which were contradictory to how this firmed up and ended up being discarded. That bugged me.
I've got a similar set of notes and phrases and such for the next two bits. There's a scene for what the "dads" are up to and one for what happens next with the kids. Anyone want to suggest a direction? Or maybe you have an idea for what could come next - go for it.
Community Prompt Sharing and Adapting
Re: Community Prompt Sharing and Adapting
Hang on, GK. I'm gussying up my resume, but after that I'll return to Gay Paree. I want to read all of Serendipity to highlight things for discussion, and I will look for anything that could suggest new directions.
It's a delightful read as it stands, but I'll e-mail you an attachment when I'm done.
It's a delightful read as it stands, but I'll e-mail you an attachment when I'm done.
“For drama to deepen, we must see the loneliness of the monster and the cunning of the innocent.”