Set Me as a Seal Part 9

Postby dongregg » Tue May 09, 2017 4:47 pm

Discussion area for Set Me as a Seal upon Your Heart Part 9

Inspector Morkus smiles as he gets a familiar feeling – the feeling a seasoned hunter gets when he knows he's closing in on his quarry.

Link to part 9 http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancontent/ff/set-me-seal-upon-your-heart-part-9
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Re: Set Me as a Seal Part 9

Postby PeteMork » Wed May 10, 2017 4:06 am

Another interesting teaser. ;)
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Re: Set Me as a Seal Part 9

Postby ltroifanatic » Wed May 10, 2017 4:09 am

Yes.Keeping us on tenterhooks. :D
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Re: Set Me as a Seal Part 9

Postby dongregg » Wed May 10, 2017 3:54 pm

My dear friends - Part 9 is up. I hope you enjoy hanging out with our murderous munchkins as much as I did while I was writing this part. :wub:
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Re: Set Me as a Seal Part 9

Postby PeteMork » Wed May 10, 2017 5:04 pm

The back and forth between the detectives is very effective. It shows not only how the logical path they need to follow to find the 'perps' evolves, but the subtle misdirection by Constantin. Good stuff.
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Re: Set Me as a Seal Part 9

Postby ltroifanatic » Thu May 11, 2017 10:45 am

Yet again another great part.The blood,sweat and tears were worth it.Eli would have looked so cute playing soccer and as we know Mr Avila isn't averse to bending the rules.Great work.Thanks for sharing . :D
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