The Things We Wish For
Re: The Things We Wish For
:gasp: I can already guess what the syringe will soon be filled with. Great piece of story telling!
“For drama to deepen, we must see the loneliness of the monster and the cunning of the innocent.”
Re: The Things We Wish For
Wow! Very suspenseful. I am curious about the syringe too; but I am also curious about why an apparently homeless sick boy who avoids the light would have a key ring with enough keys on it to give Noemie a bit of trouble in finding the one that opened the garage door.
We never stop reading, although every book comes to an end, just as we never stop living, although death is certain. (Roberto Bolaño)
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Great story GK.Very suspenseful.You have me hooked.Keep going please..Poor boy.I hope he's OK.
Please Oskar.Be me for a little while.
Re: The Things We Wish For
I have four parts, at least, for the first chapter. As time goes on I have two things happening. The first is that those who've been giving me edits & critique have done a bang up job setting me right on about a dozen things. The version here for the chapter's first two parts are starting to look rather incomplete in comparison what has been worked out. Do I start over here? I suppose the submitted version can show the edited work. Many 'thank you's to those who have been helping! The second is the longer this develops, the more it is a self-standing story than a fan-fiction of LTROI. That is a difficulty because I had intended it to be a fan-fiction. It is good because there are several of my editors who are adamant that I stop writing fan-fictions and write my own stories. So, I'm not sure what to do. I'll at least push the 'pause' button and think things over.
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Now I have no idea what the syringe will be filled with.dongregg wrote::gasp: I can already guess what the syringe will soon be filled with. Great piece of story telling!
“For drama to deepen, we must see the loneliness of the monster and the cunning of the innocent.”