After All

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After All

Post by EEA » Mon Sep 14, 2015 11:30 pm

How many sides are there to a story?


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Re: After All

Post by Mishrashade48 » Tue Sep 15, 2015 12:22 am

Oh EEA, you really know how to poke at my heart. "After All" almost takes away my ability to breathe. The abandonment that Eli feels. Then there's those letters that were just lies, but she still keeps anyway. Sheesh, you sure know how to kick someone when they're down. I think I have to take a break from my story tonight and reflect on this.
All of life's journeys come with meetings, partings, and reunions.

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Re: After All

Post by EEA » Tue Sep 15, 2015 1:08 am

It was hard to write this ff since I really wanted to capture how Eli would feel if Oskar had left. Also for Oskar, how angry he would be if Eli had chosen not to infect him.
The next part is going to be from Oskar's mom's perspective.
Thanks for the comments. :)

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Re: After All

Post by Mishrashade48 » Tue Sep 15, 2015 1:20 am

EEA wrote:It was hard to write this ff since I really wanted to capture how Eli would feel if Oskar had left. Also for Oskar, how angry he would be if Eli had chosen not to infect him.
The next part is going to be from Oskar's mom's perspective.
Thanks for the comments. :)
Well, you captured it brilliantly. Can't wait to see the Mom's perspective. Wait, it's going to be sad too isn't it? Oh no.
All of life's journeys come with meetings, partings, and reunions.

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Re: After All

Post by EEA » Tue Sep 15, 2015 1:33 am

Yes it will be sad.

I will also write from Eli's and Oskar's perspective again, and what the persons that came in contact with them feel about them.

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Re: After All

Post by Drakeule » Tue Sep 15, 2015 3:00 pm

I have to say EEA: you put out allot of stories, but this one really sticks out. I like it, and I see allot of potential for this one.

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Re: After All

Post by EEA » Wed Sep 16, 2015 4:34 am

Thank you. Yes I do write a lot. :)
This story was just going to be one part, but I decided that it was worth exploring more.

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Re: After All

Post by cmfireflies » Mon Sep 21, 2015 2:50 am

Just judging by the description this story is too sad for me to read.

For the record, this is what I think what would happen if Eli doesn't infect Oskar...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YARNZUVBgQ4
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Re: After All

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