After All
- Mishrashade48
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Re: After All
Oh EEA, you really know how to poke at my heart. "After All" almost takes away my ability to breathe. The abandonment that Eli feels. Then there's those letters that were just lies, but she still keeps anyway. Sheesh, you sure know how to kick someone when they're down. I think I have to take a break from my story tonight and reflect on this.
All of life's journeys come with meetings, partings, and reunions.
Re: After All
It was hard to write this ff since I really wanted to capture how Eli would feel if Oskar had left. Also for Oskar, how angry he would be if Eli had chosen not to infect him.
The next part is going to be from Oskar's mom's perspective.
Thanks for the comments.
The next part is going to be from Oskar's mom's perspective.
Thanks for the comments.
- Mishrashade48
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Re: After All
Well, you captured it brilliantly. Can't wait to see the Mom's perspective. Wait, it's going to be sad too isn't it? Oh no.EEA wrote:It was hard to write this ff since I really wanted to capture how Eli would feel if Oskar had left. Also for Oskar, how angry he would be if Eli had chosen not to infect him.
The next part is going to be from Oskar's mom's perspective.
Thanks for the comments.
All of life's journeys come with meetings, partings, and reunions.
Re: After All
Yes it will be sad.
I will also write from Eli's and Oskar's perspective again, and what the persons that came in contact with them feel about them.
I will also write from Eli's and Oskar's perspective again, and what the persons that came in contact with them feel about them.
Re: After All
I have to say EEA: you put out allot of stories, but this one really sticks out. I like it, and I see allot of potential for this one.
Re: After All
Thank you. Yes I do write a lot.
This story was just going to be one part, but I decided that it was worth exploring more.
This story was just going to be one part, but I decided that it was worth exploring more.
- cmfireflies
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Re: After All
Just judging by the description this story is too sad for me to read.
For the record, this is what I think what would happen if Eli doesn't infect Oskar...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YARNZUVBgQ4
For the record, this is what I think what would happen if Eli doesn't infect Oskar...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YARNZUVBgQ4
"When is a monster not a monster? Oh, when you love it."
Re: After All
Here are the other parts:
From Oskar's mom point of view
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... the-return
From Oskar's dad point of view
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancontent/ff/the-same
From Tommy's point of view
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... fear-part1
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... r-part-two
Oskar thinking about Eli
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... ces-papers
From Oskar's mom point of view
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... the-return
From Oskar's dad point of view
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancontent/ff/the-same
From Tommy's point of view
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... fear-part1
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... r-part-two
Oskar thinking about Eli
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... ces-papers