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A forum for discussing fan fiction related to Let The Right One In
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Mishrashade48
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by Mishrashade48 » Mon Sep 28, 2015 1:13 am
gkmoberg1 wrote:I feel that the bandage boy is Oskar's wounded subconscious deciding to terrorize Oskar and shock him towards coming to grips with what he's doing with Eli. It's living in the wounds Oskar received from all the bullying and using them against him.
The bandaged boy fiddles with a rubix cube, rotating it once. He lets out a sigh of disappointment.
"That could be it."
His one visible eye fixates on GK and gives him a wink.
"But I don't won't to ruin all the fun by giving it away."
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EEA
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by EEA » Tue Sep 29, 2015 11:53 pm
Well if the kid in the bandages doesn't show up in the second chapter I might borrowed him for one of my LTROI Halloween stories.
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dongregg
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by dongregg » Thu Oct 29, 2015 1:59 am
Gyah, it's almost Halloween. Where is that is that messed up looking kid?
“For drama to deepen, we must see the loneliness of the monster and the cunning of the innocent.”
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Mishrashade48
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by Mishrashade48 » Thu Oct 29, 2015 2:06 am
dongregg wrote:Gyah, it's almost Halloween. Where is that is that messed up looking kid?
He's always lurking about...
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by gkmoberg1 » Wed Nov 04, 2015 12:59 am
I wonder if he gets any candy on Halloween. It's possible many would scream, back up and quickly close the door... no candy.
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Mishrashade48
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by Mishrashade48 » Tue Nov 10, 2015 3:30 pm
gkmoberg1 wrote:I wonder if he gets any candy on Halloween. It's possible many would scream, back up and quickly close the door... no candy.
The boy with the bandages sniffles as a tear rolls down from his one visible eye.
"I never get any candy..."
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by NoxDolor91 » Tue Jan 05, 2016 1:56 pm
Good stuff a chilling first chapter,and the boy with the bandages was pretty disturbing.can't wait to see what shenanigans he has in store.
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by dongregg » Wed Jan 06, 2016 3:31 am
This is the image that continues to haunt me:
The bodies of Jimmy and Conny were laid out in front of him; pools of blood surrounding each of their bodies. Their lifeless eyes fixated on his as though they were judging him. A moment later, a delicate hand found its way into his and squeezed gently. Oskar nervously turned his head expecting to see his beautiful Eli smiling back at him, but instead all he saw was a monster. A horrific creature made of fangs and scarred flesh that barely resembled the girl he had fallen in love with.
I wish I had the moxie to work in horror like this in my stories. But I'll leave that to you, Mishrashade48. Good work!
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by EEA » Wed Jan 06, 2016 3:47 am
Is a pretty creepy story, waiting for the next part patiently.
