But did you mind?
Anyways aren't they like an infection?
How do you get infected?
You haven't seen them?
They haven't said here I am.
We will get you infected.
Do they spread through your body, enter your blood and what?
They have infected you.
And your infection kills everyone that tries to harm you...
I didn't see you cry.
The way he was found. I mean to go out that way.
"Stop! Stop!!!"
Just because he begin to suspect.
You.
The Well
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Let's remember what happened the next day after your wish.
No screaming so, no hits, you were left alone.
What else?
No screaming so, no hits, you were left alone.
What else?
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It was a good day. nothing bad.
The first day of relieved.
The first day of relieved.
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But later that was shattered.
Everyone looked at you weirdly.
As if you had done something.
What had you done?
What was that red stuff coming out of your locker?
So you screamed and screamed as the blood put down into the hall. Then it spread into the floor as you tried to wipe it out with your hand. It was the blood of all of those that you had killed. They died for you so you could be happy. But now you are not happy anymore and that is why you were back at the well....
Then it turns out that there was no well, the well where did it go?
I was there, the blood coming from the lockers, the blood that would kept pouring into my hands, everyone looking at me, where they?
The screams from everyone.
"This is sick!"
"Is this a joke!"
"Oh my God! Is blood!"
Everyone running and slipping, everyone full of blood.
Isn't the color red a wonderful color?
Then of course it could all have been a nightmare.....
Everyone looked at you weirdly.
As if you had done something.
What had you done?
What was that red stuff coming out of your locker?
So you screamed and screamed as the blood put down into the hall. Then it spread into the floor as you tried to wipe it out with your hand. It was the blood of all of those that you had killed. They died for you so you could be happy. But now you are not happy anymore and that is why you were back at the well....
Then it turns out that there was no well, the well where did it go?
I was there, the blood coming from the lockers, the blood that would kept pouring into my hands, everyone looking at me, where they?
The screams from everyone.
"This is sick!"
"Is this a joke!"
"Oh my God! Is blood!"
Everyone running and slipping, everyone full of blood.
Isn't the color red a wonderful color?
Then of course it could all have been a nightmare.....
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But if it was, why were you back at the well?
Because you chose your route, you call them, because of you they died, and now there is nothing you can do.
You can't break the pact.....
The end.
Because you chose your route, you call them, because of you they died, and now there is nothing you can do.
You can't break the pact.....
The end.
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This is stunning! This drives along in the prose form you do so well. The torment the main character is in continues right through to the end and doesn't let go even that point. Such a strong story! You should enter this somewhere.