Moonless night
Silent shadow
Wraith in the dark
Gliding past
Golden eyes search
Scent on the wind
So close the prey
Hunger
Stalk closer
He begins to turn
Spring forward
Grasping hands clutching
Fierce hug
Gentle kiss
Eternal friend
My beloved soulmate
Moonless night
Moonless night
Flashing lights and screaming siren
Scrambling for heartbeat
Straining for a breath
Looking for recognition in the eye
Staving off the Reaper one at a time
Scrambling for heartbeat
Straining for a breath
Looking for recognition in the eye
Staving off the Reaper one at a time
Re: Moonless night
Beautifully done! I am now officially a fan!
We never stop reading, although every book comes to an end, just as we never stop living, although death is certain. (Roberto Bolaño)
Re: Moonless night
This so dear. Unexpected outcome!dom-on-ho wrote:Moonless night
Silent shadow
Wraith in the dark
Gliding past
Golden eyes search
Scent on the wind
So close the prey
Hunger
Stalk closer
He begins to turn
Spring forward
Grasping hands clutching
Fierce hug
Gentle kiss
Eternal friend
My beloved soulmate
“For drama to deepen, we must see the loneliness of the monster and the cunning of the innocent.”
Re: Moonless night
Nice misdirect at the beginning 
Great poem.
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Great poem.
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"For a few seconds Oskar saw through Eli’s eyes. And what he saw was … himself. Only much better, more handsome, stronger than what he thought of himself. Seen with love."
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Re: Moonless night
Definitely give yourself great credit for this one. It starts of sinister and ends almost playfully. Definitely a favorite!