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The Fangs FF

Post by EEA » Wed Oct 23, 2013 8:22 pm

LTROI set during Halloween. The town is still Blackeberg. And so are the characters. :) :mrgreen:
The Fangs


Prologue

It hurts. My jaw. All my teeth hurt. This pain begin a few days ago. I met this strange girl. It's been two weeks since I known her. She acts all grown up. Says words that I have heard in those black and white movies that my mom watches. But anyways I wonder why might teeth hurt a lot lately. Well Halloween will soon be here! I can't wait to go trick o treating! Hopefully by then my teeth will not hurt anymore.

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Re: The Fangs FF

Post by EEA » Thu Oct 24, 2013 1:59 am

October 11, 1981

Why do I awake for?
That is the same thought that pops into his head every morning. He lays in his bed for a while looking at the poster of the forest. There in that forest he imagines getting lost and never returning. That would be better. No one would miss him. Sure his mom would probably cry for a bit, and then time would pass.
He then closes his eyes and tries to keep them shut so the sun's rays won't hit him. But it is no use his eyelids can feel the warmth of the sun's light. To wake up to another school day, to them waiting for him.
What would they do today? What were they planning for him? What were they planning for this little piggy?

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"I told you to finish your cereal!"
Here they went again. Those two. His step father and his little brother, no his half little brother Kalle.
This was a thing of every day. The screaming and the yelling. Jonny did not say anything. He kept eating his scrambled eggs. He had to he was hungry, the eggs were tasteless, no salt, and were mushy. Yes this was just another morning.
But once he got to school, once he got there. He had big plans. He, Tomas and Micke had big plans for their little piggy.

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Re: The Fangs FF

Post by EEA » Thu Oct 24, 2013 5:10 am

Don't hurt me.
He remembered those words. But he did, he hit him with the rock. Of course then he began to cry. To cry, like a little girl.
It had been a while though. It was time to hurt him, but Jonny and Micke did not want to get in trouble. Maybe they would but he would not. No, not him, he was Tomas after all. The perfect student that everyone should aspire to be. He had everything and his mother always took his side. Last time that had happened. The teacher had not believed the little piggy. Tomas always won.
So he left the house and walk to school and he thought of what fun he would have with their little piggy.

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Blah blah blah Larry kept trying to concentrate, but he could feel as his eyes were closing. To help he took another sip of the coffee. He was so tired, it had been a bad idea to come and eat breakfast with Morgan. But it was free, that's the main reason he came. But he did not expect Morgan to show up at six in the morning. But here he was, waiting for his omelette.
"Did you hear about it?"
What had Morgan been going on about? Something about a submarine or a ship in hiding? He did not recall.
"Yes," he mumble.
"If you tell me this is what gets us into trouble and any country feels that....."
Blah blah blah
Yes, just another chat with Morgan that never ended. He would rather be sleeping right now even if it meant been hungry all morning.

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Yes he had to look his best, he had to show who was in control. He check his uniform, his badge, his weapon. Then he gave one last look in the mirror. Perfect. He Stefan was the ideal cop, he was the model cop. All he needed know was a family and he would then be consider for chief of police. He was working on it now, things looked good so far. Yeah he Stefan would be chief of police. Then he would be in total control. And he would no longer have to work under a woman. Yes the chief of police was a woman. Chief Karin, but soon he would replace her.

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He did not go to school, he lied to his mom, instead he was sniffing glue in the basement. He Tommy who lied to his mom. To his mom who was dating that jerk. That lousy cop. Nothing mattered though, one day he would leave this town. Yeah one day he would, but in the mean time he sat just thinking about when that day would come.

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Re: The Fangs FF

Post by EEA » Thu Oct 24, 2013 5:31 am

Yes she was angry with him, he had done everything bad. The police had found the hat and the bag he had used. Soon in the news someone had seen him. The police would find him. So what was the solution?
To move. This made her angry, made her break the few things they had. All that had been salvaged had been two chairs, a mattress, and a couch.
"Then do it!"
That had been her shouting at him. She would not do anything. It had been his fault. So he had to.
"Do something right for once!"
So he would. After calling many companies he finally hit the jackpot. Yes the man had said. He would not mind, he would do the service at night.
"What are the items?"
He told him, yes everything was ready for tonight. So he sat there waiting for the day to end. She was sleep. Yes, tonight maybe she would give him a smile. Tonight they would arrive in their new home. Blackeberg.

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Re: The Fangs FF

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"Have a nice day in school honey." He mumbles as he eats the bowl of cereal. His mom has left already. When he woke up there was no one. That is nothing new, is how it has been a long time. Since a long time he has felt alone, there is no one he can confide in. No one that can give him a hug. Just a hug would do. But no instead what he gets is a punch to the stomach or a kick in the face.
No, he isn't meant to have any happiness. He leaves the apartment complex, his safety zone. He is safe here for a while, he walks slowly to school, he dreads going to school. He knows what's awaiting there.

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There there he is. The school bell has rung, everyone is in class. Like always piggy is there. Tomas spots him and points the first rock at him. So piggy thinks he will escape. The three hide behind one of the trees. Then as he passes them they throw rocks. They hit piggy in his back and laugh as he covers himself. Then off they go, laughing as they run.
"Sorry piggy! That's for been late for class!"

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Re: The Fangs FF

Post by EEA » Thu Oct 24, 2013 4:10 pm

He walks slowly, cautiously to school, he had walk to slow. When he arrive there was no one in the school yard. Everyone was in class now, then they were probably in class too. This was his mistake, he relax for a bit, and as he walk to the class he did not see them hiding behind the tree he pass by. Then an avalanche of rocks came hitting his back. He cover himself with his brown jacket. Then he heard their laughter as they ran pass him, calling him a piggy.
His back hurt, but the jacket had help a little to make the pain less. Yes a jacket was good to help keep warm from the cold but it was also good to protect against rocks flying to harm him.

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She was writing the new advertisements that would be put in the store's windows. Then she saw him pass by, the man she love. He was probably coming from drinking. What did he do all day she wonder?
Lacke the man she love, and yet she could not be with. They had tried living together but it had failed. Just like many of her other relationships. Well at least she was good at writing the advertisements.

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Re: The Fangs FF

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He sits in the class, not saying anything. He looks at the floor the whole time, or at his desk. Tries not to make any noise, his back hurts from all those rocks. When the teacher asks a question he does not raise his hand, nor does he volunteer to help the teacher, not even when the teacher calls on him. This pains him since even though he knows the answer, even though he knows, he has to whisper.
"No."
Now though the teacher says nothing to him, she probably thinks he is weird, unlike Tomas who is the ideal student. Tomas who once was his friend. Now he is one of his tormentors. The worst part is he let his guard down, he relax, and that was a mistake. But soon the fear comes back, soon that fear of what might they do to him haunts him for the rest of the school day. There they are to remind him of it so, to set him in his place. Yes he Oskar the little piggy who no one cares about, who no one knows if he exists or not.

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The man looks exhausted but he is happy. He keeps looking at the room with the door locked. Yes he can't wait for that door to open, yes when she sees that everything is ready won't she be happy. Night was almost coming.

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They didn't so anything anymore to him though, so he continued to walk by the hallway. He saw on one of the walls the flyers for the Halloween dance. The dance, but who would go with a piggy like him.
No, he shook his head. No one wants to date a coward. So off he walked home, always looking down the whole way. Only in his apartment complex did he feel safe.

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He only smile, kept smiling through the whole thing. Soon midnight came and the moving van arrived. Off he went to help the man with the things and got them in the truck. A table, a couch, some boxes, and a mattress. Didn't matter that his whole body ache, just seeing her was enough.
Then once they arrived in their new home, the town call Blackeberg he didn't see her anymore. Once all the things were in place in their new home, he saw that the room to her room was closed. He try to open the door but it was locked. So were her trunk and her boxes. It was time to settle in to their new home. So he lay down on the couch and went to sleep.

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Oskar closed his eyes, and all he wanted was to dream. To dream that in a dream he was important and that he could be a hero, that he could rescue someone....

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Re: The Fangs FF

Post by Clubmeister » Thu Oct 24, 2013 8:37 pm

Very, Very interesting beginning! Especially the prologue. I suspect, that in this version of LTROI Eli couldn't completely restrain herself, when Oskar hugged her :mrgreen:
Halloween can be very captivating for Jonny&Co :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
He is looking at me, silently, expectantly, in the near-dark room, neither smiling nor frowning; gaunt as a Belsen child, proud as the Devil, distant and beautiful as a star. [DMt.]

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Re: The Fangs FF

Post by EEA » Fri Oct 25, 2013 12:41 am

:)
Yeah most likely Eli could not help herself. :mrgreen:
I like Halloween, and am really enjoying writing this story. :mrgreen:

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Re: The Fangs FF

Post by EEA » Fri Oct 25, 2013 8:41 pm

Monday October 12, 1981

The beginning of a torture. That is how every Monday felt for Oskar. Every day school was a battle that he lost. The apartment complex was his castle, the court yard his fortress, the school were the battle was.
He was a warrior out to slay the dragon except he fail each time, each time he met defeat. Each day he brought a new scar, each time he died. It would be nice if it all were a game, but it was not. This was his life, a warrior with no courage. The three headed dragon who when he try to face him, fear froze him, fear of not been able to fight.
FIGHT! FIGHT!!! Do something! That tiny voice try to scream at him. That voice that try to bring out the courage that hid away. And then that voice was drown by the fear which answer.
Why even try? That would only lead to more bad things. It was easier just to take the punishment.
There! He did what they told him.
Splash out his head in the toilet water. Would that be enough?
"Piggy is been helpful."
And off they went running, and he stood there laying in the floor, dead next to the toilet.
That's all. They were done.

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"Hakan you have to."

He dreaded those words. So even when he did something correctly, not even a thanks, not even a caress, not even a look into his eyes, not even a smile, not even a note, nothing, nothing, nothing.
That is why he drank last night, that's why he kept on drinking. So what if she had been left alone? So what let them find him, let them get her.
Of course later on she would reproach him, would give him an angry look, and so he waited for the night. Waited for her to wake up, to reclaim him. Since that was the only way to make her see that he was alive.

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So he drank again. He broke his promise. But she was to going to fall for his game. So she went outside in the cold night, but she did not feel anything. She was only twelve and she did not understand Hakan, why had she chosen him? But he had to go, he had to, couldn't he understand her?

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She walked around the court yard until she hear the door to the other building open and she hid herself in the darkness. A boy was coming out, he was wearing a brown jacket and some blue pants. He kept looking at the ground as he walk. He approach one of the swings and he sat there. He swung the swing slowly and moved his feet in the snow. Then the swing stop and he wiped his face with his sleeve. Then she heard as he began to sob silently, the tears were too much and he could not stop some of them as they hit the snow.
She walk slowly away from the building, she understood, the boy wanted to be alone. In a way he was just like her. She also went at night by herself and hid herself and cry,cry, cry because she felt so alone...
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