This is the second chapter of, I guess, what is evolving into a post-film story about Eli & Oskar. It picks up where Christmas in Karlstad left off. Hope everyone enjoys. Thoughts and comments are, of course, welcome.
I'm not sure where I'm going with this. I feel like I'm groping in a dark room. Who knows what'll happen?
Contemplation at Dusk
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That was a nice one...Eli thinking about their future. I liked her trying to will herself to change as well.
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I am probably blind but where it the link to this "second chapter" I don't see anya_contemplative_life wrote:This is the second chapter of, I guess, what is evolving into a post-film story about Eli & Oskar. It picks up where Christmas in Karlstad left off. Hope everyone enjoys. Thoughts and comments are, of course, welcome.
I'm not sure where I'm going with this. I feel like I'm groping in a dark room. Who knows what'll happen?
p. s. if anyone would be so nice to tell me some instructions how to get to the "second chapter" I'd really appreciate it
Phillip J. Fry: "I hate my life, I hate my life, I hate my life."
"It is the nature of men to create monsters, and it is the nature of monsters to destroy their makers."
"It is the nature of men to create monsters, and it is the nature of monsters to destroy their makers."
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Here you go.HonzaP wrote:I am probably blind but where it the link to this "second chapter" I don't see anya_contemplative_life wrote:This is the second chapter of, I guess, what is evolving into a post-film story about Eli & Oskar. It picks up where Christmas in Karlstad left off. Hope everyone enjoys. Thoughts and comments are, of course, welcome.
I'm not sure where I'm going with this. I feel like I'm groping in a dark room. Who knows what'll happen?
p. s. if anyone would be so nice to tell me some instructions how to get to the "second chapter" I'd really appreciate it
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... ion-dusk-0
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thanks I found it while searching the site with the readings (recent ones) and again it's beautiful, you could write a book it would be great, I will be your first fan 
Phillip J. Fry: "I hate my life, I hate my life, I hate my life."
"It is the nature of men to create monsters, and it is the nature of monsters to destroy their makers."
"It is the nature of men to create monsters, and it is the nature of monsters to destroy their makers."
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I hope it doesn't turn into that! Because it's totally disruptive right now! (But fun too)HonzaP wrote:thanks I found it while searching the site with the readings (recent ones) and again it's beautiful, you could write a book it would be great, I will be your first fan
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Wonderful job! This one really sucked me in. You have Eli down pat -- I can completely imagine her thinking this way. Looking forward to the next chapter.
We never stop reading, although every book comes to an end, just as we never stop living, although death is certain. (Roberto Bolaño)
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wow. I don't know what to say. Incredible. Love your writing.
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All three chapters are excellent, but this last one is so beautiful...
Bli mig lite.