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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Fri Apr 26, 2013 4:56 am

Meanwhile in the park

Hannah

"What is it Hannah? Did you see the future again?"
"I did see something but it was hard to tell..."
"What did you see?"
"I don't know Jason. But all I know is that something bad will happen if we go and eat dinner at Eli's."
"But they invited us. They are..."
"Jason can't you see! Somehow we have avoid going to Eli's house during dinner."
"Really but I promised Oskar I would play Mist with him."
"No Jason! We can't go! It will only get us in trouble!"

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Tue May 07, 2013 6:46 pm

Troubles ahead

Eli

"Oskar we have to find Lucy before she gets us in trouble."
But Oskar did not answer.
"Oskar...."
And then I saw as he was running inside the house! Oh so he was so anxious after all to see Lucy! He just left me here talking to myself! While he, he goes to her rescue!
Both of them will see when I find them!

Oskar

Oh no what if Lucy finds the surprise I have for Eli! No I have to find her before she does!

Lucy

I decided to continue looking around! There were other rooms I wanted to search! Oskar and Eli's house was really big! Then hey I found a room with a red door. It said 'Don't Open Eli!'

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Fri May 10, 2013 12:47 am

Eli

I ran around everywhere, but I could not find them! Then I search and search until I found a door. And it said, "Do not open Eli!" It was written in Oskar's handwriting. Of course i was going to open the door! And then I heard some voices! I couldn't believe what I heard!

Oskar

I opened the door and there was Eli wearing the jacket I had bought for her! I knew she would love it! And before Eli could see me I gave her a big hug!
"I knew you would like the surprise! Don't ever think of running away again!"
"I miss you so much!"
"Really Oskar? Wow I didn't know that! And this is all for me!"
Oh no! That voice! It wasn't Eli! It was Lucy! And then I heard the door slam! And there there she was Eli!
"Oh so you miss her so much! Now I understand everything!"
"Eli let me explain!"
But before I could explain more trouble came!

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Fri May 10, 2013 1:03 am

Lucy

"You finally came Eli! Of course Oskar doesn't need to explain! You two missed me so much, and I know how serious you are!"
I lightly punch Eli by her shoulder.
"Oh I see! I see!"
"Come on who wants a hug!"
And I gave her a big hug!
"I miss you to Eli!"

Eli

How dare she hug me! And there is nothing to explain! Of course there is! And I can't believe Oskar! He gave Lucy the red jacket I had always wanted! How many times did I mention to him that I wanted that jacket! But worst he put banners up! Banners for her!
"I miss you!" "Don't ever leave me again!" "You complete me!"
And before I could get into a fight with Oskar! Momma and papa came in.
"What's all this?"
"Oskar is welcoming Lucy."
I was so mad at Oskar but I had to control myself.
"Oh how nice!"
"And you must be Lucy."
"Nice to meet you."
"Well lets continue this welcome over dinner!"
And we all went to dinner grrggrrggr.

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Sun May 12, 2013 3:41 am

The dinner

Eli

Oh just look at her! How could Oskar do this to me? He gives her the red jacket I wanted for a long time! How many times did I tell him! And then he goes off and buys it for her! And then he puts all those banners for her! I miss you! Don't ever leave me! You complete me! And me what about me! When I ran away all I got was a hug! No red jacket! Or an I miss you note! And he even puts out the chair so she can seat! She is seating in my chair! Is me who is suppose to sit next to Oskar not her! And now I have to seat and watch that Lucy! And Oskar is so happy to see her! He even gives her a big smile! Oh and he is giving her another hug! I am so angry! If only papa and mama weren't here! I would grrggrrggr

Oskar
"Eli please..."
But Eli wasn't listening and as I was getting the chair for her to sit down Lucy went and sat on it!
"How nice of you Oskar! You are such a gentleman."
"Lucy this...."
And Eli stomped her way to the other side of the table. And as she sat down she kept looking angrily at me.
And before I could sit down Lucy stepped on my foot!
"Could you put my jacket in the back of the chair Oskar."
I grimaced in pain as Lucy handed my the red jacket and then she finally moved her foot.
I sat down, my foot hurt so much. But this was only the beginning. Things got worst as dinner went on.

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Re: By the train station

Post by Clubmeister » Sun May 12, 2013 8:09 pm

EEA wrote:...
I wonder. Is this how Eli and Oskar got rich? By selling juice! I wonder who came up with the name? Eli juice? Even the name made it sound tasty! ...
Lucy has found "Eli juice". I'm afraid even think about what will be... :lol:
He is looking at me, silently, expectantly, in the near-dark room, neither smiling nor frowning; gaunt as a Belsen child, proud as the Devil, distant and beautiful as a star. [DMt.]

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Mon May 13, 2013 10:34 pm

Lucy

Wow Eli was really something! Her performance as if she was really mad at Oskar just like that night!
"Eli will you.."
"I am not talking to you!"
Then Eli's dad spoke.
"Eli sweety is...."
"Ah don't worry Eli's dad. Eli is just playing around! She is pretending to be jealous just like that night we met! When she thought Oskar had invited me to dinner!"
"Oh ok." Then he smiled at Eli and Oskar.
"What's strange games you kids play," said Eli's mom.
Then Eli's mom went to get dinner. No way!
"Wow lasagna! That is what I ate that night!"
"I knew it Oskar! You had all this planned out! No wonder you were so desperate to eat lasagna!"
"Is not true! I just felt like having lasagna today! You weren't around and momma asked me!"
"Oh sure I bet you knew Lucy was coming! And you planned all this out!"
"No I didn't!"
"Yes you did!"
"No I didn't!"
"Yes you did!"
"See just like that night! They are pretending to fight! How nice!"

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Re: By the train station

Post by PeteMork » Mon May 13, 2013 11:38 pm

Clubmeister wrote:
EEA wrote:...
I wonder. Is this how Eli and Oskar got rich? By selling juice! I wonder who came up with the name? Eli juice? Even the name made it sound tasty! ...
Lucy has found "Eli juice". I'm afraid even think about what will be... :lol:
Just remember. If Lucy drinks ejuice, Oskar, Hannah, (and Eli) will be able to read her mind. :twisted: :lol:
We never stop reading, although every book comes to an end, just as we never stop living, although death is certain. (Roberto Bolaño)

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Mon May 13, 2013 11:53 pm

But this is a special e-juice. It also guarantees not only mind reading but body swapping. :lol:

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Tue May 21, 2013 3:40 am

Eli
"Yes you did Oskar!"
"No I didn't Eli!"
And on and on we kept of fighting until I heard an awful sound.
"Lucy is the best! Lucy is the best!" Over and over again.
And then Lucy gave one of her smiles.
"What is that annoying sound?!" My head was hurting!
"Oh it's just my cell phone's ringtone. Pretty cool huh! "
"....."
"Now were is my cell phone."
And Lucy began to search for it.
"Here it is! Is my mom!"
Lucy had a mom......

Lucy

It was mom calling!
"Hi mom! I finally found Eli and Oskar!"
"That's nice! Let me see say hi to them.."
And I put on the video camera so mom could meet Eli and Oskar!
"There they are."
"Nice to meet you two."
"And this is Eli's and Oskar's mom."
"Nice to meet you."
"My name is Elaine."
"And this is.."
"Richie! Richie is that you!"
"Lucille..."
And Eli's and Oskar's dad face turn red.
"Of course it is! Long time no see!"
"Richie?" Eli's mom said in a weird tone. She almost sounded angry.
"Yes Richie and I go way back! He wanted to marry me you know! I could have been Mrs. Dawson." My mom said jockingly.
"Oh really."
"Elaine let me...."
"Those were the days. Why don't you tell her Richie? How we met?"
"I don't think..."
"Or you want me to tell the story..."
"Sure why not? A nice story to hear over dinner." Eli's mom said, was she irritated? Of course not! She probably was just playing along! Pretending to be mad at Mr. Dawson! So mom begin her tale!

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