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Re: By the train station

Post by PeteMork » Sun Apr 21, 2013 9:19 pm

EEA wrote:The Lucy Chronicles
Chapter 1. The unwanted reunion
The Dawson house
...
And before I could finish talking someone was ringing the doorbell. Who could it be?
Well......it's probably either Lucy, or if they're lucky, "The Author" :lol:
We never stop reading, although every book comes to an end, just as we never stop living, although death is certain. (Roberto Bolaño)

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Re: By the train station

Post by Clubmeister » Sun Apr 21, 2013 11:29 pm

EEA wrote:...
"Super travelling Rubik's cube. Side effects: Loss of memory! So beware! Do not turn the cube, else bad things could happen!"...
Wow :shock: So cool side effect!
Sometimes I'd like to turn such cube.
PeteMork wrote:
EEA wrote:The Lucy Chronicles
Chapter 1. The unwanted reunion
The Dawson house
...
And before I could finish talking someone was ringing the doorbell. Who could it be?
Well......it's probably either Lucy, or if they're lucky, "The Author" :lol:
Even don't dream about it Pete. Surely it's Lucy (my feelings are so funny puzzle-pated that I even cacn't choose the smile)
He is looking at me, silently, expectantly, in the near-dark room, neither smiling nor frowning; gaunt as a Belsen child, proud as the Devil, distant and beautiful as a star. [DMt.]

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:27 am

PeteMork wrote:
EEA wrote:The Lucy Chronicles
Chapter 1. The unwanted reunion
The Dawson house
...
And before I could finish talking someone was ringing the doorbell. Who could it be?
Well......it's probably either Lucy, or if they're lucky, "The Author" :lol:
Maybe.... :lol:

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:31 am

Clubmeister wrote:
EEA wrote:...
"Super travelling Rubik's cube. Side effects: Loss of memory! So beware! Do not turn the cube, else bad things could happen!"...
Wow :shock: So cool side effect!
Sometimes I'd like to turn such cube.
:mrgreen:
PeteMork wrote:
EEA wrote:The Lucy Chronicles
Chapter 1. The unwanted reunion
The Dawson house
...
And before I could finish talking someone was ringing the doorbell. Who could it be?
Well......it's probably either Lucy, or if they're lucky, "The Author" :lol:
Even don't dream about it Pete. Surely it's Lucy (my feelings are so funny puzzle-pated that I even cacn't choose the smile)
:lol:

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Mon Apr 22, 2013 5:00 am

Oskar
Why did Eli kept bringing up the Lucy subject? Finally it was just the two of us together! And she kept on and on about Lucy. I had plan a special day for the two of us. Nothing could go wrong! After all those obstacles we had to overcome, finally we had a day for ourselves. Papa and mama had gone out to buy somethings, Hannah and Jason had taken Einstein to the park, and Jack was off doing experiments in the lab.
No one, just the two of us finally! But Eli kept at it. And I had to reassure her that Lucy had just been a nightmare. But I was wrong, so wrong!
When the doorbell rang I had a bad feeling!
"No Eli don't!"
"Oskar it could be Papa and Mama. They could have forgotten the keys to the car!"
And off Eli went running. I rush after her and when she open the door. I could not believe who it was! It couldn't be! This had to be another bad dream!!

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Mon Apr 22, 2013 5:46 am

Lucy

I had found the house! Finally after all this time! I had found them! Now Eli and Oskar had to find me!
So I rang the doorbell and waited. There! It was Eli who opened the door!
"Ha you are it! I finally found you!"
I tag Eli.
"Lucy!"
"Now is my turn to hide!"
Then Oskar came rushing forward! I tagged him too!
"You are it too! Thought I wouldn't find you did you!"
"It can't be..."
"Come on! I bet you won't be able to find me! Time to play hide and go seek!"
And I ran to the house and went to find a good hiding place!

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Tue Apr 23, 2013 8:57 pm

Oskar gets in trouble.
Eli loses control.
And....
Coming up the dinner were unknown secrets are reveal. :mrgreen:

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Wed Apr 24, 2013 2:36 am

Chapter 2 Finding Lucy

Eli
Oskar just stood there. He kept caressing his cheek! And he just stood there and let Lucy in! But me, when I ask him to let me into his apartment he wouldn't let me in! He was rude to me! He snapped his fingers and kept pretending that there was a shield by his door!
"Oh you seemed to be happy Lucy showed up."
"Eli don't start. She pinched me hard."
Yeah sure. Grgrrrr
I was getting angry. What was happening to me? Suddenly flashes from that night came back! My head was staring to hurt!
"You expect me to believe that!"
"See its happening again! Just like that terrible night!"
"I remember it was you Oskar! You were the one that wanted to play hide and go seek!"
I couldn't helped it! I was losing control of myself! And then I hear her voice from far away!
"Wow cool stuff you guys! Nice rooms! I wonder where this door leads to!"
And then before I could do anything! Momma and Papa were parking the car! We were going to be in trouble.

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Wed Apr 24, 2013 3:27 am

Oskar

That Lucy. She pinched my cheek too hard. And now Eli is starting with her jealousy again. And now my head is starting to hurt. Those horrible memories from that night come back.
'Yes let's play hide and go seek while we wait for the train'. And then we started to play.
"I did it because we were friends with Lucy!"
But Eli wasn't listening, she had her arms cross.
"Eli you know the only..."
But before I could finish there were a lot of noises coming in from inside the house! And then Lucy's voice!
And oh no! Mama and papa were here!
We were going to be in a lot of trouble!

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Re: By the train station

Post by EEA » Wed Apr 24, 2013 3:38 am

Lucy
Wow this was a big house! It looked like a castle! And windows everywhere that lighted up the rooms! Wow Eli and Oskar must have won the lottery or what! Maybe they got a rich inheritance!
But the best part was they had a big swimming pool! Maybe they wouldn't find me here!
So I sat down by the shade and grabbed a strange bottle that was on the table. It had a label that said.
"Experimental Eli juice."
I wonder. Is this how Eli and Oskar got rich? By selling juice! I wonder who came up with the name? Eli juice? Even the name made it sound tasty! And since I was thirsty from all that exploring, Eli and Oskar wouldn't mind if I had a drink! So I waited here until they would find me.

Oskar

"Eli mama and...."
This is all your fault Oskar! Now we...."
"No, is your fault!"
And before we started another fight mama and papa were coming smiling.
"What are you two up to?" Papa said.
Then mama came over to.
"What is my butterfly up to? And my sweety pie?"
And she gave Eli a hug and she kissed me on the cheek.
"Nothing."
"Well we just came since your papa forgot..."
And before mama could finish! Lucy spoke!
"Come on you guys! I bet you can't find me!"
"Who is that?" Papa asked.
"That's Lucy."
"Is she a new friend you two made. How nice!"
"Have fun!"
"Invite her to dinner. I bet she is a delightful girl."
"Oh look I had the paper right here."
Papa showed the paper to mama.
"Didn't I tell you."
"Well have fun with your friend!"
Then mama and papa left. We were save for now!

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