My Poem On Let The Right One In! Took Ages To Write lol!!

[DMt.]

There once was a young man named Ken
Who swallowed a set of encyclopaedias;
His mother said, "Ken!
What have you done?
They were for supper!"

[PeteMork]

I like it. I like the feel of simplicity and innocence it suggests. And its child-like intensity and seriousness.

[joshpaid]

this poem is a much more thoughtful ode to LTROI than my let the right one in bumper sticker. p.s. i don't actually own a LTROI bumper sticker.

[awqaw]

this poem has recieved an appalling lack of attention, i think it's extremely creative and clever. and i am an authority on poems...limericks mostly.

Aw thanks

[a_contemplative_life]

Thought I would bump this endearing little poem for any new members who might not have seen it.

[dongregg]

Thanks for the bump. a_c_l. The poem captures the simplicity of feelings that I love about the film. Very childlike and innocent.

[intrige]

I really like the poem. But I get the feeling you haven't read a lot of poetry, but that doesn't matter. It's still good, and long, it seems you must have used a lot of time on them all.

I wish if you do write more that you bring something more that is a bit less obious. Like, describing something without writing them out directly?

I can't say I am an expert, but I have tried to write a few LTROI inspired poems, and they are hard.

[a_contemplative_life]

I really like the poem. But I get the feeling you haven't read a lot of poetry, but that doesn't matter. It's still good, and long, it seems you must have used a lot of time on them all.

I wish if you do write more that you bring something more that is a bit less obious. Like, describing something without writing them out directly?

I can't say I am an expert, but I have tried to write a few LTROI inspired poems, and they are hard.

Well, I didn't write the poem, and awaw hasn't been here for 6 years so I think it's unlikely that your suggestion will be taken. I personally enjoy the poem because I find its child-like simplicity charming.

[intrige]

Oh was I rude? That was not my intention!

[a_contemplative_life]

Oh was I rude? That was not my intention!

I would never assume that about you