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Once Bitten

Post by a_contemplative_life » Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:40 pm

http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... -chapter-1

Now we'll go the other way. Maybe see if Tape Trve is right: that love and hatred are very close to each other.
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by covenant6452 » Sun Mar 14, 2010 6:59 pm

:shock: :o
YES!
Is this the beginning of an a_c_l alternate universe?
If it is I like it already! 8-)
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by HonzaP » Sun Mar 14, 2010 7:26 pm

hey that was great !!! :) but somehow I fear the worst... :cry:
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by moonvibe34 » Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:21 pm

oh that was great! an accidental turning huh. i like it. i really liked the description of Oskar's state as Eli drained him.
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by cmfireflies » Sun Mar 14, 2010 8:25 pm

Just remember that 12 year old aren't likely to hold grudges and JAL vampires aren't like Anne Rice's...

I wonder if there's anything Eli can do short turning Oskar into a Hakan-like caretaker that will ever make her unsympathetic, I mean NOMMING ON YOUR BEST FRIEND after a friendly game should be enough to make anyone else a complete monster, right?

And was it so accidental?
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by PeteMork » Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:45 pm

Well written as usual, and very sensual, like Chapter 8 in your previous epilogue. Lets hope vampires are not loners by nature, or their relationship could become strained, to say the least. Let the moral ambiguitites begin! ;)
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by DMt. » Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:28 pm

OMFG

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Re: Once Bitten

Post by lombano » Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:17 am

cmfireflies wrote:And was it so accidental?
That's ambiguous at most...
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by gary13136 » Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:51 am

It seems that Eli is going after the Guinness Record for most deaths and resurrections in a 250 year period. And as things stand at the moment, Oskar will probably get an honourable mention. :lol:
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Re: Once Bitten

Post by a_contemplative_life » Mon Mar 15, 2010 4:34 am

HonzaP wrote:hey that was great !!! :) but somehow I fear the worst... :cry:
I fear that you have good reason to fear.
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