Once Bitten
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Once Bitten
http://let-the-right-one-in.com/fancont ... -chapter-1
Now we'll go the other way. Maybe see if Tape Trve is right: that love and hatred are very close to each other.
Now we'll go the other way. Maybe see if Tape Trve is right: that love and hatred are very close to each other.
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Re: Once Bitten
YES!
Is this the beginning of an a_c_l alternate universe?
If it is I like it already!
Du måste bjuda in mig...or else!
Re: Once Bitten
hey that was great !!! but somehow I fear the worst...
Phillip J. Fry: "I hate my life, I hate my life, I hate my life."
"It is the nature of men to create monsters, and it is the nature of monsters to destroy their makers."
"It is the nature of men to create monsters, and it is the nature of monsters to destroy their makers."
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Re: Once Bitten
oh that was great! an accidental turning huh. i like it. i really liked the description of Oskar's state as Eli drained him.
"But dreams come through stone walls, light up dark rooms, or darken light ones, and their persons make their exits and their entrances as they please, and laugh at locksmiths."
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Re: Once Bitten
Just remember that 12 year old aren't likely to hold grudges and JAL vampires aren't like Anne Rice's...
I wonder if there's anything Eli can do short turning Oskar into a Hakan-like caretaker that will ever make her unsympathetic, I mean NOMMING ON YOUR BEST FRIEND after a friendly game should be enough to make anyone else a complete monster, right?
And was it so accidental?
I wonder if there's anything Eli can do short turning Oskar into a Hakan-like caretaker that will ever make her unsympathetic, I mean NOMMING ON YOUR BEST FRIEND after a friendly game should be enough to make anyone else a complete monster, right?
And was it so accidental?
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"When is a monster not a monster? Oh, when you love it."
Re: Once Bitten
Well written as usual, and very sensual, like Chapter 8 in your previous epilogue. Lets hope vampires are not loners by nature, or their relationship could become strained, to say the least. Let the moral ambiguitites begin!
We never stop reading, although every book comes to an end, just as we never stop living, although death is certain. (Roberto Bolaño)
Re: Once Bitten
That's ambiguous at most...cmfireflies wrote:And was it so accidental?
Bli mig lite.
Re: Once Bitten
It seems that Eli is going after the Guinness Record for most deaths and resurrections in a 250 year period. And as things stand at the moment, Oskar will probably get an honourable mention.
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Re: Once Bitten
I fear that you have good reason to fear.HonzaP wrote:hey that was great !!! but somehow I fear the worst...