We, The Infected

They sat on top of the ancient monument. A large boulder, grayish-green with lichen, balancing on top of three smaller rocks atop a hill carpeted in needles. https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/d/df/Uppallad_sten_blackeberg.jpg Wonderful! Your story has its first illustration. :D As usua...

Hans Zimmer is one of a kind!

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Mon Apr 08, 2024 4:52 am

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Now to the question whether Eli would do such a thing.
Perhaps. He certainly did it once, to Jimmy and Jonny in the poolhouse.

Agreed. He could have just snatched Oskar away without killing anyone.

Very well done...and very sad. You are an excellent writer. You've found many very interesting and original ideas to explore. I took them away from their past. You're taking them back to it, with both good and bad results for them both. Your Oskar is a bit harder than mine was; a bit surer of himsel...

Don't stop! You've got a good thing going here.

Very clever. The whole thing works well because your story is credible.

As usual, very well done. Your attention to detail makes the whole thing not only a smooth read, but relatable. You've also taken the time to give all your relevant characters depth and complexity, which makes the final twist at the end all the more surprising. Micke's child. And her familiar smile....

Love it. Brrrr!!

Glad to see you're doing well. I've long enjoyed reading your heart-felt posts and watching your great videos. Happy Birthday!

Bravo to those brave moderators who defend us on the front lines!!